In the Classroom of Diane Mahoney
Submitted by Diane Mahoney
by Diane Mahoney
October 26, 2011
Study skills writing and showing a portrait with your writing. Students Abby Borgman, Brie Meyer and Corey Conway have written an excellent example.
Nicolle, the giant alien, breaks her bones 24/7. Sometimes she will run over herself with the four-wheeler. Her head is a jungle of hair pulled back in a ponytail. The clothes look like they came from the junkyard across the planet. The purple skin that she has is bumpy and all wrinkly!!!! Her outfits don’t match at all. The shoes that she has to wear are ginormous because of her huge feet. Her ears have yellow slimy stuff coming out of her ears.
